This is another in my new style. I'm not sure how one would describe it. Basically, I pick a two to thre word phrase such as, "On my walk" then break it with a "," . Then continue the line. It's a bit of rebellion. My old english teacher used to read my poems and say, "This is crap! It has no style, it has no rhythmn, It follows no set structure." I got the inspiration from reading poems by others and a friend who complemented me on my new style. She know's who she is I hope. Also, I saw a poem and the girl wrote she would delete it because her engglish teacher was teaching rhytmn and meter, etc. That her poem would be cast out as garbage. Just a note to all you english majors: If you become teachers, do inspire the young poets. Do not hold them to anceint forms. Also, if my grammar is off in the poem, I ment it I bet. In this description I did not. All comments welcome. If I misspelled something do tell me. I'll correct it. Otherwise, enjoy or scream at my revolt. Oh I'm done sorry :giggles: