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I, saw perfect in everything about her finds to be flawed
I, want so badly to spill complements over her like rain

She, looks at me with eyes that hide a inner pain she hides
She, walks away into the rain laughing and calling my name
She, whispers softly in my ear as we embrace in the cold rain

Be careful, my heart is fragile and has been bruised before
Be careful, your heart is fragile and has been bruised before

I, brushed her fire red hair away from her cheek and kissed
I, watched her catch her breath and stand still as a statue

She, whispered in my ear and said give me time is all I ask
She, smiled to reassure me she wasn't angry or scared
She, said to me let me kiss you first and she  kissed me

I, stood froze with her hands on my cheeks and lips on mine
I, stumble over words and emotions that made me begin to tremble
I, watched her take me in her arms and whisper just give me time

So, there we stood holding each other in the rain like lost lovers
So, there in the rain we broke a barrier neither knew was there
So, in that moment the barrier,down, I simply said take your time
©2006-2009 ~HONAW
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I wrote this for a woman I am getting to know. I know she likes it and I'm really happy.

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:iconwynter-rain:
Wow, incredible as usual. Takes time and effort... this is wonderful. Lucky lady

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~A Million Miles Away~
:iconhonaw:
yes..I believe you know here :D

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Expose yourself to your deepest fear; after that, fear has no power, and the fear of freedom shrinks and vanishes. You are free. - J.M.
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:clap:

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Challenge my own world to chaos...
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Headbanging member of Metalmusic Club!
:iconhonaw:
:bow:

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Expose yourself to your deepest fear; after that, fear has no power, and the fear of freedom shrinks and vanishes. You are free. - J.M.
:iconweitmare:
Very nice.. I'd love to have something like that written about me.. I can see why she likes it :)

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Vegetarians taste better!

"Nothing is less real than realism. Details are confusing. It is only by selection, by elimination, by emphasis that we get at the real meaning of things." -Georgia O'Keeffe
:iconhonaw:
:blush: well..after we talk more it may be in your future

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Expose yourself to your deepest fear; after that, fear has no power, and the fear of freedom shrinks and vanishes. You are free. - J.M.
:iconweitmare:
:D

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Vegetarians taste better!

"Nothing is less real than realism. Details are confusing. It is only by selection, by elimination, by emphasis that we get at the real meaning of things." -Georgia O'Keeffe
:iconhonaw:
:D Hopefully it won't scare you off

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Expose yourself to your deepest fear; after that, fear has no power, and the fear of freedom shrinks and vanishes. You are free. - J.M.
:iconweitmare:
nah.. you can't do that.. I don't scare easily.. I work with Emotionally Disturbed teenagers.. it takes a lot to scare me ;)

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Vegetarians taste better!

"Nothing is less real than realism. Details are confusing. It is only by selection, by elimination, by emphasis that we get at the real meaning of things." -Georgia O'Keeffe

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